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Oso

This morning I wished I was a bear
covered in thick, comforting hair.
And as the harsh wind blew through,
I'd lie and cuddle, to hibernate with you.

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This fall wind always seems to surprise me without a coat of any sort.

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  • zt
    November 11, 2007
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    I can relate to the feeling of wanting to shut out the world and hibernate with the one you love. It would be wonderful to be able to not have to do anything or be anywhere except right there with them for as long as you wished. ~sigh~ I need to retire! Thanks for the minivacation through your words...


  • unoodostres
    November 7, 2007
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    holy.


    this is intense.
    no, it's the opposite of intense,
    but still,
    intense.

  • His Own Demise
    November 6, 2007

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    ≡=-

    i think i share something of the same notion - how wonderful it would be to let go of everything but the time shared with that special someone...it'd almost be heaven