From behind stained glass I hide, spying
upon a beautiful creature, my Adonis.
He sits among the stone pews,
worn with age, but still quite elegant
spotlighted by the midmorning light
spilling across the abandoned cathedral;
casting an ethreal glow.
But the glow is highlighted--
as there is a magnificent aura
surrounding him and his proximity.
Long, lustrous locks of an oak tone
that enthrall me without limit,
and bring me great pleasure in the form
of sumptuous dreams and faint hidden smiles
And the rich shades of umber that swirl
about your acutely beautious ovals;
you are my Adonis.
Fill me with your resplindecy;
I love you.
Author notes
Instead of being in love, one often finds themself in fantasy. Well, if that makes any sense.
I have a tedency to describe dreams.
This was a dream I had last night, about a very becoming male sitting in a church and being highlighted by the radiance of the sun. He turned, and smiled at me, beckoning me closer. He said he knew me from afar, [?????] and wanted to fall in love, but wasn't sure how.
"Umm, doesn't it sort of just happen?"
"I guess, but I need someone to help me out.."
And that's when I awoke. Bah, I didn't even get a name of the strapping gentleman...
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This is also my 100th poem on AllPoetry!
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Sweet!
I got a really good image here, made me though about a lot of stuff recently ^^.
Thanks and well done!
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Thank you very much! I love your userpic! The Uchiha clan will rule forever!
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good flow good flow
i use that name all the time
Cause im a Adonis -
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Oh, really?
Thank you.
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Astounding use of imagery here. Great job!
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^^ Thanks be to ye, fair laddie!
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oooh, so I'm fair now am I? Thank YE then, fair lass.
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Score! We're just a fair bunch of people! *flails wildly in happiness* WE IS BE FAIR!! ^^
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INDEED!
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I love this!
Well done!
Beautiful imagery,
And the concept of this,
Written from a dream...
It'v vivid,
And shows a sense of longing.
"spotlighted by the midmorning light
spilling across the abandoned cathedral;
casting an ethreal glow.
But the glow is highlighted--
as there is a magnificent aura
surrounding him and his proximity."
Interesting imgery there.
Reminds me of something like a cathedral without walls, in the middle of the woods, or something. Like something you'd see from the Celtic religion or something.
Either way, I really like it, but I'm rambling now.
Well done.
-XIII-
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Thank you very much. The cathedral in quetions was partially inside, and partially outdoors, as the building was in disrepair, you know, climbing vines and what not. It was beautiful, and had such a eeirely surreal atmosphere. And there was the most haunting music, fading in and out...
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Ah. I know what you mean.
Then it was probably a lot like I saw. -
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Luckily I remember the dream vividly, [I often forget, or only remember bits] as this dream may be target for many a poem...
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Cool, cool...
Well, I like this, so it works out.
Keep writing then.
I'm writing a couple of songs dealing with a similar subjuct of the last one I posted.
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