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Rest in my Disguise

Self confsessed and still depressed
exausted now from lack of rest
my aching heart will soon be left
half obbsessed, inside my chest

Incinerate my souls desire
to be not what they dont require
raise my guilt up ever higher
and drop me then into the fire

alon i shall lay, lay dejected
and though i may, may be neglected
inside myself i am not
pleasant now, with feelins rejected

your symathy will symbolize
what my heart shall not idolize
that i cant rest in my disguise
and cant find peace in lonley lies

10.1.07

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  • Rogue
    July 18, 2008

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    There is so much emotion in this piece. It's excellent, you can really feel your pain. I hope you pull through okay. Thank you so much for sharing.