The light comes screaming threw the window
my tears hit the page of the notebook
they're seeping threw every peice of paper
blurring every line of ink
this is not a simple emotion
it tears at my heart like the claws of a bear
it grabs hold of my lungs and squeezes
untill it captures and seizes
every last breath...
overwhelmed and drowning in my own seclusion
all i can see your face
all i can hear is your voice
all i can feel is this pain
and all i want is you...
Comments
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Wow, such raw emotion.
Although I don't usually like repetition, but You did it very well while emphasizing the pain your in.
Nice piece:-)
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Nice... I like this. Short and sweet but with impact! Keep up the good work!
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