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Sweet Surrender

Your eyes are deep and hollow
swirled with dark and lonley shades
your footsteps i will follow
down streets where every beauty fades

your whispers growing colder
but your words are sinking deep
they rest upon my heavy heart
pierce untill my veins will weep

i fall beneath in sweet surrender
blind by your obbsession
i breathe in hard and block it out
and this is my confession

i forced myself to live in pain
i'd scar myself to prove you wrong
the sorrow was my refuge
it made me anything but strong

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  • Rogue
    December 14, 2007

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    Wow

    This is amazing. I love it's flow...How it seems to break, and then pick up again...Kind of like a heartbeat.


  • emolv
    November 14, 2007
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    i like this oe it is wonderfully writte!


  • malevolent
    November 6, 2007

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    i forced myself to live in pain
    i'd scar myself to prove you wrong

    Very strong words and wonderfully written. This work of yours is right up my alley. Adding you to favs. Keep up the awesome work.