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Haiku 57

I feel only comfort
when the rain blast me down to
the ground of this world.

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  • rainboots
    April 13

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    Woot woot

    I suck at haiku's. Looks like you don't. This one is great. How have i not read any of your stuff until now?


  • horsecowgirl
    November 11, 2007

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    opposite from me but ok. this is a "cool" feeling piece. it has kind of a different feel than some of your other haikus. Keep up the fabulous writing!
    ~horsecowirl~