Here we all are together for the holidays.
Again we cheer the aunts, uncles, cousins, siblings,grandparents, and parents.
Playing in the leaves and football games in the pass time.
People wait for the feast to come and be serve.
You just wait to see my dad's green beans!
The time is here for the turkey!
Hmm, how it smells so wonderful.
Awe inspiring it always seem to sit around with family.
No one ever seems to want waste moments like this.
Kids run around to work of the calories.
Seem will go to get their tenth plate.
Giving stories of holidays with family will start soon.
Inspiring site of Christmas stuff will pop up soon.
Very many songs will then be sing for next holiday.
I will still will not forget Thanksgiving though.
No one will ever lose a holiday that allows them to be fat!
God bless you all this wonderful time of the year!
A contest entry
- Happy Thanksgiving by daviscth.
400 points, ended November 15, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - #132 Celebrating 50 Gold's by daviscth.
450 points, ended September 9, 2008, 29 entries
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Comments
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thank you for giving me the chance to enjoy this acrostic again.
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I agree with Daviscth. there are some misspelled word that make it a little confusing to read. there is also a few repeat words and little errors like that that should be taken out. but a lovely poem. best of luck in the contest! keep up the fabulous writing!
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This is filled with wonderful images of the upcoming holiday. You did a great job with this but there a few mispelled words and if you correct them it will make it even better. Thank you for posting in my contest and the best of luck at judging. Cathy
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Thanks for tell me about misspelled words. I forgot to use spell check. I fix them now I think.
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