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"Beauty"

Charming face,
Or pretty eyes,
Hansome face,
Or enchanting smiles
What is beauty?
Is it on face?
Or behind the skin,
In your heart?
I say it friend,
Its your soul'
That's the beauty
Your love, your joys,
That's the beauty
Your words, your thoughts,
That's the beauty
So, wanna 'ave beauty
Light your heart'
An' be the "BEAUTY" 

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  • amellowtruthaddict
    December 3, 2007

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    wow........you only have one comment on this?? your words are so simplistic and small, yet mean so much and prove you understand whats going on, i love this...

    thnx for the comment by the way...you really seemed to understand...and about the non-capitalized i and im's when i write certain poetry, i feel it means more if there are no capitals or "proper grammar" shiit i just dont care

    So, wanna 'ave beauty
    Light your heart'
    An' be the "BEAUTY"

    amazing stuff, glad to have met you!

  • amellowtruthaddict
    December 3, 2007
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    wow........you only have one comment on this?? your words are so simplistic and small, yet mean so much and prove you understand whats going on, i love this... thnx for the comment by the way...you really seemed to understand...and about the non-capitalized i and im's when i write certain poetry, i feel it means more if there are no capitals or "proper grammar" shiit i just dont care So, wanna 'ave beauty Light your heart' An' be the "BEAUTY" amazing stuff, glad to have met you!


  • JCSuperstar
    November 7, 2007

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    I like it. i think that its beautiful. it sends a good message to those with low self esteem and confidence in themselves