You...
My darling...
Won’t you come home?
Just for a little while...
Please?
I miss you terribly...
So please...
Keep your promise...
And stay by my side.
Author notes
OK, so this is a rather short piece, I can also imagine that not many people would agree that it even meets the standards of poetry. But, raw emotion was asked for, this was written when all I could see, hear and feel was someone I loved dearly. When all I wanted was them to be with me, regardless. So the emotion in this, to me, is nothing but raw...as for the style, well I guess it's very much my own style if I am right and no one else agrees it's poetry.
A contest entry
- Open Wounds by Eugene Cash Hensley.
700 points, ended November 26, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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RAW!
I could relate to this on a personal level
when someone you love leaves the wound runs deep
Sad & heartfelt
~sugar~
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BEAUTIFULLY SAD
Brings tears to the eyes and a pain to the heart...Raw emotions of need and love pour out all over your page!...So please keep your promise!...Looks like an open wound to me
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