Curiosity raising
lust's cacophany,
commiting sins -
hoping they wash away
in silence,
along the bay
of everyday lies
drowning in adultery
with souls,
and the last sip
is of disappointment.
Author notes
When you become disappointed with yourself, on anything you did -- (no matter how you tried tp not commit a sin) -- you'll die. Sace yourself from self-pity - it's the utter destruction.
A contest entry
- A powerful prompt by Lavender Butterfly.
440 points, ended November 8, 2007, 13 entries
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Comments
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That is quite a good ending line you have there, along with the imagery of the poem
Thank you for entering the contest, I wish you the best of luck!
Leander -
So expressively profound and deeply powerful. Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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Great writing Asfand! Excellent word choice. Good luck in the contest.
~KK
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