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At Last I am Secured


...At last I am secured...

In amidst of racing molten heat,

My body, will burn and
nothing will remain.

...At last I am secured...

In amidst of the death,

Whom even the frightening
Humans fear.

...At last I am secured...

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  • Naridill gold member
    November 11, 2007

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    Nicely penned, the flow is beautiful. The actual meaning of what is a little confusing but the actual poem is very beautiful.

    Thankies for entering and much luck ~~~!