Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Unguarded

Missing image
Silence’s empty fullness glows
gold on rippled perfection mirroring
day’s recede, as copper’s solitary bronze
diverts vigilant heart to unlock thoughts
of pristine delight.

Author notes

Photo by Princess Perdue

In a list

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • aurora13 silver member
    November 18, 2007

    Edit | Reply

    Amazing!!!!

    Amazing!!!! So very very beautiful ... it is rare to see so much of beauty packed in few simple words... !!!


  • penman gold member
    November 8, 2007
    Edit | Reply

    wonderful

    very well expressed. A terrific poem for the picture. Best of luck in the contest


  • Princess Perdue gold member
    November 6, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    So much said in so few words...and so beautifully penned. This is truly gorgeous. Thank you for entering your lovely piece of work into my contest. Good luck.

    Shaz xx