Under immunity of disguise
eyes view the world,
camouflaged in sanctuary
in search of protection.
Surrounded within
this womb of asylum
discovering a universe
of deceit and trust.
So many hands of malevolence
will seek to gleefully destroy,
tearing asunder
innocence of spirit.
Behind walls of clarity
the facade will only fall
as bricks of security
build solid foundations.
Devotion purely
from sanctity of soul
tenderly from one to the other
in fortified castles
of invulnerable.
Author notes
Prompt - Safe.
A contest entry
- Safe? by Naridill.
495 points, ended November 11, 2007, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Love this~ the title is as beautiful as every word chosen to every phrase penned. Such beauty.
Thankies for entering and much luck
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Superb hunny, you always just write with such clarity and honest... well done on this one you got me thinking
Karen -
wow well written, good luck
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