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[ It rains here today ]

It rains here today
Sentience drinks for two
He is now happy


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  • Seeking Peace silver member
    November 7, 2007

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    Lovely this is, you have created a lovely image in my head with this one... well done and goodluck in this contest

    Karen


  • azure85 gold member
    November 7, 2007

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    It rains here today
    Sentience drinks for two
    He is now happy

    A very interesting haiku, and L2 could be any living thing enjoying the fresh water from the rain. Very thoughtful haiku, thank you so much.