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[ every day i feel closer. ]

every day i feel closer.
feel closer to what, I'm not sure.
i just keep looking, for what?
is their something i desirer
or is it somewhere i want to go
am i just dreaming a life
an i just trying to find myself
i wish i knew
because its trying me to pieces
making me scream in my head
every day i feel closer.
feel closer to what, I'm not sure?

 

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  • chyld of the shadow
    December 4, 2007
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    wtf

    i know where you wanna go... home motherfucker, you can stay with me, one way or another i will get you back here, its not the same anymore. you know that much. ill be waiting you son of a pot smoker. me and donna............................................................................yep-yep


  • crimson rose avarus
    November 12, 2007
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    that was kind of an interesting poem in other words you have no clue what yoru going for in life.