Wrapped in emotion's of tenderest strength,
my soul finds relief within your heart's mind
and deep wounds of the past find healings kiss.
Embraced by words of sincerity's kind,
my heart finds a way to accept its' way
and pain becomes lessor throughout the day.
Cuddled within a heart's beat ringing true,
walls begin to crumble about my feet
and I climb from the dark rubble beneath.
Assured by promises that have shown truth,
trust is given freely, though slowly still
and my smile is reflected within.
Healed by hands that know butterfly kisses,
my body no longer cringes in fear
and delight is known when you touch my soul.
Gathered in arms that hold me through the night,
my soul's heart has found a love that is true
and we will walk through eternity's path.
my soul finds relief within your heart's mind
and deep wounds of the past find healings kiss.
Embraced by words of sincerity's kind,
my heart finds a way to accept its' way
and pain becomes lessor throughout the day.
Cuddled within a heart's beat ringing true,
walls begin to crumble about my feet
and I climb from the dark rubble beneath.
Assured by promises that have shown truth,
trust is given freely, though slowly still
and my smile is reflected within.
Healed by hands that know butterfly kisses,
my body no longer cringes in fear
and delight is known when you touch my soul.
Gathered in arms that hold me through the night,
my soul's heart has found a love that is true
and we will walk through eternity's path.
Author notes
this may be corny, but i have often thought about what it would be like to be safe again. i think the things i have listed are what it will take for any man to ever be close to me again. i keep myself wrapped in a coccoon where noone is able to cause me harm. especially the physical kind.
thank you for reading me.
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A contest entry
- Safe? by Naridill.
495 points, ended November 11, 2007, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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I like this, kind of like a poetic journal. Collection of thoughts. Really emotionally gripping and personal. You really captivated me.
Thankies for entering and much luck
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I think this is a beautiful Write
I think this write is beautiful and honest because of your notes. I hope you can let the walls down. I hurt so bad that my son died, but thats because I took a risk and loved him. It's risky business just to be in a relationship, you just need to learn to choose the healthier ones. Your a great lady and I enjoyed this poem and I hope it proves to be true soon for you. Blessings Kelle Marie, stavykm

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Healed by hands that no butterfly kisses,
my body no longer cringes in fear
and delight is known when you touch my soul.
This would be so wonderful. Most of the time a coccoon is the best place to be.





