but my poem
smells like gutted fish
when every word
is a gaping silence.
In a list
A contest entry
- 22 words or less - 3 days by Namita.
300 points, ended November 8, 2007, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
critique welcome.
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congrats!
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congrats to you on the gold - wonderful 'timing'
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Gut inspired me to write something yesterday.
One word. Hannah?
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ahahahahaha you evil ebhil girl! i loved the "gutted fish"
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