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My Jesus my Saviour

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My Jesus my Saviour
You’re my precious Lord
the only One to love me so
my heart rejoices within.

My Jesus my Saviour
You’re the Holy One
I praise your Name within
my heart, my Lord, my only King.

My Jesus my Saviour
You’re a worthy King
for sinners you died and rose
again, and my heart leaps within.

My Jesus my Saviour
You’re the King of Kings
I bow before your throne
my heart in praise to your Name.

My Jesus my Saviour
You’re my precious Lord
the only One to love me so
my heart is filled within.

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  • stavykm gold member
    November 21, 2007

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    Beautiful Write

    You are amazing!! What a beautiful acknowledgement to our Lord and you expressing your personal relationship with him. Beautfully written. I really enjoyed the flow of the poem and the reminder of how wonderful our Lord and Saviour is! We are so blessed. Fran thank you for all of your kind and compassionate comments. You are a excellent poet and I feel honored that you read my poetry. God bless you, your sister in Christ Kelle Marie, stavykm

  • californiagirl
    November 13, 2007

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    I really liked this. At the beginning I wasn't so sure, but then as I got farther into it, it really started to grow on me. Thanks so much for your entry.


  • penman gold member
    November 8, 2007
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    Excellent

    Very well written. A truly inspirational creation. Thank you for sharing this uplifting poem.


  • myrataal silver member
    November 6, 2007

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    Wondrous write!

    Simply lovely, Frans!

    I would change but two thingies:

    My Jesus my Saviour
    You’re the Holy One
    I praise your Name within
    my heart, my Lord, my only King.

    My Jesus my Saviour
    You’re a worthy King
    for sinners you died and rose
    again, and my heart leaps within.


    Otherwise: DIVINE!
    Love
    Myra


  • leo2
    November 6, 2007

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    The sincerity and the message in your prayer is truly something we all should strive to possess. Amen!

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long

  • stavykm gold member
    November 6, 2007
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    Beautiful Write

    Oh how good the Lord is! The title My Jesus my Saviour, his mine too. than the first line and every stanza repeats the title is perfect. I love all of it but the ending is my favorite You're my precious Lord the only One to love me so my heart is filled within.
    Lovely Write, Praise The Lord, Blessings my friend Kelle Marie, stavykm

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