Can you hear
blood pumping through the ear
that lil rush
before the kill
behind these highschool walls
and tortured halls
when every thing goes still.
Your face among the crowd
hidden, fake facade, and blackened shroud
Vicious intentions
finally clear
lies and truths, I know
lil song and dance, quite the show
and now you're oh so near.
For all you've done
crucify you in the sun
expose you for the bitch you are
The shadows of your demons contend
I'll get you in the end
no distance is too far.
So what's next
got me perplexed
was it fun
fucking up my life
hurting me and mine, the ones i love
upon your pedestal, judgement from above
spreading hate and strife.
Casting doubts
with condemning shouts
like Salem's witches
at the stake
All between us is blood
a murky gruesome flood
no thought of the lives you take.
So how's it feel
to have friends kneel
to your dark
and twisted ways
We once were friends,
but, alas, all beginnings have ends
as do the old days.
So rot in your grave
You, i can no longer save
your games of chaos
and destruction
Keep throwing stones in your hatred well
I'll meet you at the gates of hell,
and see if you win the devil with your psychotic seduction.
Author notes
This poem is dedicated to someone I once called "friend", but she betrayed me like no other person could. She made me feel things I'd never felt before: Hatred and Betrayal. This poem is about the loss of all respect I ever had for her.
A contest entry
- Sweetie, This Is What Broken Looks Like. by Heartbeatsxfading.
600 points, ended May 20, 2008, 39 entries
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Comments
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Interesting, please take my advice, you shoudl not get hurt like I did....
Great anger but......"Friends"? I think not. I'm exposing him for what he really is...a rapist, if you can't accept that, the courts/investigation will turn up some stuff you really didn't think you could believe. He has you under his spell, of kindness and honesty, when what he really is is obsessed. He can not get enough of you, and if you tell him to go away, he won't. If you tell him no, he won't comply. He proposed to me over 5 times, each time he didn't leave me alone, he even bought a ring when I said I broke up with him.
I am sorry for the pain you will experience while you are with him, you may not feel it now, for I thought he would never betray me...but I did feel it, and he did betray me. Not only me, but my trust, my love, and my heart. He is not what you think he is, he is not what he says. And if you had any sense at all my "psychotic seduction" as you call it, would not be psychotic, but would be me exposing someone for who...no for WHAT, he truly is.
Please, take my advice, there are better people, even though it may seem like there isn't, there is someone that will love you but not OBSESS over you. Although you're not my favorite person in the world, no one should have to go what I went through and am still going through. NO ONE should have to experience something like rape.
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well to be honest you did a very dark job, which is very awesome, your poem doesn't need more it explains everything your feelings, which is the most important thing in poetry, the feel of the poem. you did an amazing job, i liked the part that says:
We once were friends,
but, alas, all beginnings have ends
as do the old days.
very dramatic and yet realistic.
good write! and keep it going!
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