A step is no walk.
Miles on end just living.
One day I will fly.
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Run to the exit.
Forgetting to live each day.
Lost in little things.
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Love is always near.
We forget to hold it dear.
Stop running away.
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A contest entry
- Dust Off Those Old Haiku (Traditional 5-7-5) by Pollycheck.
425 points, ended December 15, 2007, 57 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A step is no walk.
Miles on end just living.
One day I will fly.
----
Run to the exit.
Forgetting to live each day.
Lost in little things.
---
Love is always near.
We forget to hold it dear.
Stop running away.
Thank you for entering my ku contest. This is a very interesting haiku chain. -
You got me with this one... I think we spend to much time wishing life away that we do not take small steps... we run sometimes, from things (probably) but it'd be nice just to slow and smell the roses for a change... gorgeous haiku, I am a huge fan of this form.... grand style hun
Karen
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Life is not a walk in the park
yes life is for living that is for sure yet we do tend to rush when we should slow it down and enjoy what we have before and life with faith in hearts You know i enjoy your zennish thinking you say it in simple word but wow do they pack a power punch
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