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Until the Day I Die

Another day without you, is another day I fear
Just another day, where your vioce is something I cannot hear
I know patience is a virture, but it's not on your Dad's side
I'm not going to be a stranger any longer, my face I can no longer hide

Sweetheart I'm going to get you, I pray to God that you're alright
I'm sixteen now, but I made up my mind so young,
I know a true gift when something comes along, and you're worth the fight

Until the day I die
My heart beats for you
Beats for you

I'm going to do anything
Just in order to show you
My heart beats for you

And that I'll try to do everything
Just to save you

xox

Author notes

For one, this is real, I tried keeping it short. I met this "lilguy" nearly two years ago.
Saw your contest...and thought there wouldn't be more than perfect timing.
I can only contact him well through a p/c... and the only guy I've ever fallen in love with....
...And he hasnt txt me back in 2hours....I'm truly petrified...I just hope he's ok
But yeah... hope it was short enough, have fun with the contest.

There is hope right, please tell me that, but don't lie.

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  • WillAlwaysLove silver member
    November 6, 2007

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    Thank you for entering, you are young and I hope all goes well. You have your whole life ahead of you! I am 36 and I still have problems with my love life! LOL. Nice penn and great flow, thank you for entering my contest and good luck.


  • Lost-Rose-Petal
    November 5, 2007

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    amazing write chicky. I loved it. and u know i know how u feel. we both in the same situation. I hope that soon we will both have our men in our arms to never leave again.