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my girlfriend

you make me feel happy and proud
you take all my pain away
everyday i get to see you even if its not for that long
it still gets rid of my problems in life
makes me have no worries
makes me feel so far away but yet so near
my gf makes me feel safe
when ever i hold her here

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dedicated to my gf brittany (dragonzbloodxgirl)

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  • Naridill
    November 6, 2007

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    I would prefer non-abbreviations but I do understand the message. A beautiful tribute.

    Thanks for entering and much luck ~~~!


  • dragonzbloodxgirl
    November 6, 2007
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    ahh babe i love this poem!!!!..i love u so much!!!!!