Have you ever danced around
To the rhythm of the rain
Every had someone with you
That always keeps you sane
Have you ever put your fingers
In the spaces of another
To try and find your own identity;
You without a cover
Have you loved someone so dearly
And they loved you just the same
You could never find a fault
Never need someone to blame
I've gone over all of this
and I have no need to lie
If you find that you haven't
Well neither have I
Author notes
Yeah.
I wrote this sometime within the last month.
>_< Curse me and not putting dates!!
In a list
A contest entry
- LOVE: Made for Each Other by Shenanigans.
1000 points, ended December 15, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - BRING Y0UR BEST by DAMSELx.
600 points, ended February 11, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Input always loved...thanks.
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I do like this piece;
It shows that you know just what you want
but have yet to find it!
Very nice write!!
Thank you & best of luck! -
Aw...I like this one a lot. Different ending from what I expected, but very well written. I can relate..lol.Great write.
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lol at your a.n. and your bad memory!!! lol!! but yeah i REALLY liked this one! so i hella thought of the song when i saw the title. then i thought of that one day we made you listen to it! lol at you!
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Wow I love this it is so great! Yes by the way I have danced to the rythym of the rain! I really like the way this was written and I really enjoyed reading this peice. It was done so well and I like how when you reached the end you did not try to lie or hide it that you have never expeirienced this and that youy are still looking! Great job and thanks so much for the entery. Keep up the great writting!
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haha, wow, I like the twist at the end. Very honest of you, I respect that. It's also really cool because with all the pretty language in the first stanzas and the imagery used to describe the love, the shift in the last stanza is abrupt, but doesn't come off as bitter. Excellent write, keep it up, and good luck in the contest!
--Shannon
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