At a touch
I jump.
Am I really ready
for this?
At a whisper
I shiver.
Not so sure.
With an embrace
I resist.
This is going too far.
I'm just not ready
for him yet.
A contest entry
- Whatever You Want It To Be by Cursed4Eternity.
600 points, ended November 6, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Safe? by Naridill.
495 points, ended November 11, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Lovely poem, even if I am unsure of how it fits with the contests guidlines.
Thanks for entering and much luck
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The way you set up this poem goes really well with the feel of it. I love the hesitation I get while reading this, and the way you have it written helps readers understand it much better. Thank you for entering my contest.
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