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The gaping hole inside me.

Baby it’s getting worse,
The gaping hole inside my chest.
It’s sucking away the light.
It’s pumping venom through my body.

I need to leave this place,
It’s holding me back and holding me in.
I’m unable to dream,
All I see are my nightmares.

I don’t think I can hold on much longer,
It’s pulling me into the hole.
I want to give in and let it take me.
Take me away from here.

I’m not going yet baby,
But soon I’ll be leaving.
I’ll fall out of this hell,
I’ll find a place to be happy.

You said to me once,
That I was dying inside.
I’m finding it hard to find
The will to stop the poison

I love you so much baby,
It hurts to leave you.
My angel of agony and pain,
My last regret with tears of shame.

Author notes

This was written in my science class today...I had to take a break from researching the genetics of schizophrenia... its all very confusing, did you know that?

I just had to write it down... I think about you every day and i'll never be able to forget you my guardian Angel. XoXo to you beautiful.

Claire-Anne

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  • Girl With Guitar silver member
    November 6, 2007

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    My angel of agony and pain,
    My last regret with tears of shame.

    Baby, would it be too weird for two guardian angels who are in fact each others guardian angels to leave together....?

    I want to come with. I really want to come with. If it can't be together then my God I'm following. I love you baby, so so much. More than words can really describe..


    XoXo to you too beautiful.
    Your Bandy ♥♥♥


  • Lady Australis silver member
    November 6, 2007
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    this is beautiful hunni
    i hope your ok
    i love you
    i miss you
    xxx

    • Ravenblood
      November 6, 2007
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      thx sweety. i love you too.. sorry about the other comment on the same poem. had to delete that poem coz i had this one.. so claire bear messed up again.