o
ooo
oh nuts
I hate this place
the new people and the
dog just drive me nuts chasing me
all the time making me
run and hide on
a branch
I used to like
this neighborhood alot
main need was to collect nuts all
summer and then try to
remember where
they are
hid for winter
so that I have food to
eat when the snow begins falling
past years now history
looking for my
vittles
ooo
o
Author notes
This was written in the Behrquain Swirl that was created by Arkbear
In a list
A contest entry
- Poetry Formed XXI by Arkbear.
1050 points, ended November 28, 2007, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Let Your Form Shine by 2lullabyhaven.
475 points, ended April 21, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Review Requested
Comments
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This is a nice form...I'm new to it, which makes it very interesting-thanks for entering it and good luck with it
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Very nicely done to grab up the Gold in this one. Excellent presentation, topic is pretty much the same as mine.
Scott
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Griswold
Thank you so much for your comments and conratulations on the silver. Bears contest are always on the harder side, but I enjoy entering them.
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Polly, Polly, Polly ~
Best Read....
Best Form....
Best Presentation.....
Best Message.......
Best FUN!!!!
.....thus far.......hehe ~
I still have a few to go!
The best of luck with this.....and thank you for taking such Pride in your Shape and Presention......that means a lot to me ~
Score...100
Bear ~
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Bear
Thank you so much for the gold. i was very surprised to ssee that I had won it. I am honored considering the great poems that where submitted in this contest. -
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Well earned Polly ~
....with a piece of Art such as this, you deserve much more ~
See you in the *Arkquain String* contest
Be well,
Bear ~
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This was perdy
Am still trying to make a diamond shape rather than a pyramid myself Good luck in the contest 
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cutiepie
Thank you so much for atopping by and commenting on my poem. It is appreciated.
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