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focal point

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Silence painted
in pitch black.


[Shades apart]


I run
in your track
and paint it
with my life.






~

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Written November 5, 2007

A contest entry

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  • Desire gold member
    November 7, 2007

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    Thank You!

    Thank You for Your entry: focal point

    Powerful verse that leaves images to get the mind to go
    Wonderful weaving of words:
    Silence painted in pitch black
    [Shades apart]...

    Magnificent!

    especially with the I run in your track...

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent!


    Judging will be done shortly
    Best wishes to You in the contest!!
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • AshliiAsphyxiation
    November 6, 2007

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    I run
    in your track
    and paint it
    with my life

    Why must it be that every time i read your writes, im so fufilled, that i think i should pay it?
    haha, its brilliant, absolutley great. The imagery and everything in this is amazing.
    You rock deary.
    xx