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the book of suicide


    if thy wish for lack of warmth, breath, or beat of the thys heart. thy shall willingly be takin to the gennie of death.
    if thy truly wish for death thy should tell this gennie and the gennie shall preform a hospital act, of lack of beat, for if they wish for not a beat, they beat will die and drummer shall be gone
    if thy truly wish for death thy should tell this gennie and the gennie shall preform a hospital act, of droping a lung for wish of not a breath to spare, thy shall become dead for no longer having a breath to tute thys horn,
    if thy truly wish for death thy should tell this geenie and the geenie  shall preform a hospital act, of lack of warmth, let be live in the mountains and left to freeze to death in a avalanch, or preform in the rain, nor the wind , nor the snow for if thy truly wish for death, thy is a permentant member, and i shall not leave for i have sinned
for suicide is not holly, i wish for death

not a poem just felt like saying something

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  • pretty-sweet
    April 18, 2008
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    Nice

    You have soem feeling..and a half of a sad person...WOW But you havae great ryhym sceme.


  • BleedingDeep
    December 22, 2007
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    JUst because it dosn't ryme dosn't mean it's not a pome, it'a a bautiful piece keep it up!!