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i reach

I reach for harmony even when faced with dark clouds
reaching for his hand even though I'm still a child
being led by savors making sure I reach my destination
a long journey I demand of myself, knowing these obstacles I'm facing
placing tuff decisions but willing to show the heart that I have
knowing the effort that I put in, getting there is only the half
my soul will never give up, no footsteps in the sand this time I get lifted up




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  • Griswold
    November 7, 2007

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    Very well done for this picture prompt, I like the last line for sure. God will carry us when we can walk no longer...Scott


  • Desire gold member
    November 7, 2007

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    Thank You!

    Thank You for Your entry: i reach

    Powerful verse that brings forth the effort made to be touched by Higher Powers also the feeling of perseverance and not giving up...
    even with the hurdles set before the child...


    Love the message and just had one question,
    for savors...in line 3...
    did You mean saviors or savior?

    I thought that is what You meant

    Wonderfully penned!

    Emotions tug at the heartstrings ...

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent!


    Judging will be done shortly
    Best wishes to You in the contest!!
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~