If I were to trace my mind
down the center
in a black and white world,
I would hope to find the hues
of a color-blind existence.
And that you'd be there with me.
Author notes
For picture-prompt contest
A contest entry
- - One Track Mind - by Desire.
525 points, ended November 7, 2007, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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all i can say is woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww you really know how to keep it short and sweet
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Short and sweet. Not many people can pull that off. I see that it won a gold trophy, it was well deserved.
I enjoyed reading this piece.
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Very sweet and touching write. Congrats on the gold--well-deserved!
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Wow! I am totally amaze by the brevity and the power of this piece.
You deserve the Gold. Congratulations
Keep writing and thanks for sharing.
VIRGOAN
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Thank You!
Thank You for Your entry: Down the line
Powerful verse that You have weaved and I just started crying like a baby
Thank goodness I did not have mascara on
Wonderful message and to speak of hues in
of a color blind existence...
and that you'd be there with me.
and I was envisioning many there with You
when You said that
The will and intent of Your words...
Magnificent!
Just the thought alone ...
gets the reader to unite
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Judging will be done shortly
Best wishes to You in the contest!!
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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