they had only one choice to make,
or so they thought.
that 'road less travelled' seemed too dangerous,
and they steered very far away.
but look!
it is now this path that has the most life.
who knows what would have changed had they known?
A contest entry
- - One Track Mind - by Desire.
525 points, ended November 7, 2007, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Very Nice. but you never know till u follow that path, don't ya.
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Thank You!
Thank You for Your entry: if only
Powerful verse that leaves the reader pondering with questions of what if...
images to stain the Mind
Love the words:
'road less travelled'...
Wonderful!
This leaves much, much to think about
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Judging will be done shortly
Best wishes to You in the contest!!
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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