After the siesta,
as is their habit,
they take their
late afternoon-
early evening stroll
along the sea-side promenade.
Couples of all ages;
young nuclear families,
some with prams;
older families with grandparents,
and perhaps aunts and uncles,
to demonstrate how the family tree
has spread its branches.
They stroll, many arm-in-arm,
greeting friends and nodding
to acquaintances
made on previous strolls and,
without any apparent rule-of-the-road,
flowing smoothly
against the counter-flow
of groups advancing
from the opposite direction.
Pairs of lovers smooch,
uninhibitedly,
on their raised love seats
atop the sea wall.
Embracing, kissing, caressing,
uncaring of the passers-by
on the crowded sidewalk.
As the evening twilight falls,
numbers increase for, by now,
the non-walkers
have brought out their cars,
with windows and roofs open
in the warm evening air,
to add the syncopated thud
of their car-music
to the sound of footfalls which,
with that of human conversation
and greetings,
rises to the balcony
from where I watch
the passing parade.
Author notes
Written whilst holidaying in Italy
A contest entry
- Quickie: Freeverse & Whatever by Ryno.
300 points, ended November 8, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Hmm... I think you did an excellent job with capturing the beauty of the moment, painted a very good picture in our minds, great snapshots.... wonderful imagery. Nice work, thanks to you for your entry!!


