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Tick tock

Like a wind-up clock,
tick tock, tick tock,
those little games we play,
all but bring a brighter song
to the dreary day.

Like a little dog,
I yip and snip
upon your heels in jest.
Now I run around your car
I'm fast and cute at best!


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  • Taodesteve
    December 14, 2007

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    Good

    Kinda muddled, but that's fine. It just makes it hard for me to read... But who asked me anyways?

    I read this about 10 times and I'm still not sure I get the emotions running into it... I know! I'll read it more, when it's not 3AM! Eureka!