I wish I may
I wish I might
Have this wish
I wish tonight
Just to lie
In your arms
No more worries
Switch off alarms
Drifting off
Into a peaceful sleep
Happiness comes
Into my dreams you creep
I wish I may
I wish I might
Have this wish
I wish tonight
Be out of school
Out on my own
But with you
Never to be alone
With you
So very near
Our lives together
My future is clear
I wish I may
I wish I might
Have this wish
I wish tonight
Just to see you
Would make me smile
But alas
Your number is all I dial
Hearing your voice
So soft and sweet
When I’m near you
I feel so complete
I wish I may
I wish I might
Have this wish
I wish tonight
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I like it! You did very well with the rhymes. I agree with Cassie, though. Some of them were off a bit... they rhymed but didn't fit as well as they could have.
but still i liked it...
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Yeah i realized that when i read it.. i might edit it.. not sure
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hmmm....interesting....a few of the lines were off to me....but i was good....i liked it...
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AMAZING!
I love this poem. Using such a common phrase of hope and adding such clever rhymes. Two very enthusiastic thumbs up!!
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Thank you very much
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