He made her jealous
on purpose he tried.
When the girl asked, "Do you love her?"
on purpose he lied.
He played with jealousy
like it was a game.
Little did he know
Things would never be the same.
His plan was working
but he had no clue.
How wrong things would go,
the damage he would do.
One night she broke down,
feeling very
alone.
Just her and the blade,
no one else home.
She dialed his number,
he answered, "Hello"
She told him she loved him
and hung up the phone.
He raced to her
house
just a minute too late.
Found her lying in blood,
her heart
had no rate.
Beside her was a note,
in it her confession.
Her love for this boy,
her only obsession.
As he read the note,
he knelt down and cried.
Grabbed her knife,
that night they both died.
She was found in his arms,
both of them dead.
Under her
note
his handwriting said:
"I loved her
so, she never knew.
All this time
I loved her
too."
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This is dark but good all at the same time
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This is absolutely amazing!
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whoa!
you're good that was strong... kinda a romeo and juliet theme going on here. Nice work
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omg, i keep coming back to read this one over and over again, but each time it brings me to tears....
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... your poem was the first to EVER bring me to tears... im still crying as i write this.. that was amazing, you have no idea how meaningful this is to me... i've seen this happen befor. i sincerely hope all of your poems are this good
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touching
your words painted such a vivid picture i felt like i was there,so it felt messed up that things ended that way.i wanted to cry also cause some guys are that stupid,great job
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WOW!
this poem....simply amazing, amazingly penned out, amazing emotion, just amazing
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OF THAT"S SAD BUT ROMANTIC I"M CRYING. I loove this poem.
Nessa
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absolutely awesome
you did a greatjob you should be proud of yourself. it sounded alot like how i feel right now. but i myself have no courage or want to kill myself.
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Nice i love rhymeing poem
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awww this is so good. It's amazing and sad. It's a great write.
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Omg This Is Amasing I Absolutly Love This Poem This Is one Of My Favorite. It Almost Brought A Tear To My Eye I Absolutly Love This Poem XD
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damn this was a good as poem shit i liked how you written it and everything i honestly think you did a great job
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