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perfect lines?


overstimulated reason fans fires,
proliferating genius inside...



the perfect lines,
somehow the ones that got deleted...

"Damnit, what were the other lines!!!"


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  • Namita
    November 8, 2007
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    LOL nice.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 7, 2007

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    Man do I know this one. Happens at least once a week. Bad thing about mountains, slightest wind and electric is out...normally in the middle of a great write that I have changed as I entered...and fruastredly can never get back the same way.
    Nicely said for so many of us who can relate.
    Best to you!


  • CherylAnn
    November 5, 2007

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    Been there so many time and makes me quiet mad(lol)you told it boldly true my friend...Good Luck in your contest
    Blessings
    ~Cheryl~