what is this I am feeling these past couple of days
like a butterfly in my stomach trying to get out
why is it my monthly thing has been on delay?
Man I should have made him pull out.
I have no idea what is to come next after this
We have already been through this before
It shouldn't have gone further than a kiss
but then again we both wanted more.
So I guess I'm going to have to wait
and watch my belly get big
We have no choice,for its too late
It's no fair I'm going to be the one looking like a pig.
I should have learned from the last time
that things don't always go as planned
I'm just scared for you because us being together is a crime
I hope we can get our parents to understand.
Author notes
if you want to know more about this just messege me also option 4
for tarja's contest option 2,7,8. i think this would fit in with all three of them.
*i think this poem needs something to it,so any advice would be appreciated.
A contest entry
- 111th Contest by Tarja.
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What did you think
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hahaha!
i think there is a billion people who can read this and relate.
XD well done on this write
i enjoyed reading it very much so!
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ummm, it's really a good poem, however i would watch the use of some terms like "pull out" and "pig" they just don't seem to fit right. Thanks for your entry ^.^
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Ugh I have been there once or twice with my husband... but it was never a huge deal because I think we could handle a child.... We kind of do already with my sister.
But anyway, this was very deep and intense and full of much emotion thank you for entering and good luck.
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Ouch... This poem is a different and an unwired one. I like the strong use of emotion in this piece. I can feel the fear and disgust in being in that situation through this work. I really liked it, though i cannot relate to this... I can still imagine. I feel that the line - 'It's no fair I'm going to be the one looking like a pig'. Was a bit harsh and awkward. I have heard that being pregnant is now a blessing, and in fashion..
The inside beauty of a woman truly comes out and is expressed when a woman is pregnant.
Just my opinion.
Other than that, well done ! -
This was a wonderful poem and is a good reflection of the thoughts 'n emotions in this situation.
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Oh my gosh! Are you okay? What happened? Great poem by the way, good luck in the contest!
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Wow! I can relate to this more than you think. Great write
Thank you and good luck!
Leslie
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