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What is Love?

What is love?
What is love?
Is it the look within my eyes
The ability to forgive the captured lies

Can you see it in my life
Does is share pain, hope, and strife

Is it red, yellow, pink, or blue
Is it young, old, or brand new

Can you taste its tender bliss
Is it obvious in my kiss

I don't know what love is for you
You'll see it different, that is true

All I know is what I see
I see love in you and me
What is love?
What is love?

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I wrote this because of a discussion topic in a college class.

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  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    October 17, 2008

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    Love is different for everyone. Isn't it? I'd think so. I think you did good with this. Made me think as I'm sure it did others. Great write! Keep up the good work!


  • brian180
    April 15, 2008
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    hmmm whoa i was blown away by this poem.first great topic to talk about and write a poem about.then i love the phrases you used in this poem.it is decriptive and realistic.i really like the phrase of the tender bliss and the kiss.i think this is a happy deep super poem.


  • lilrochick silver member
    December 6, 2007
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    wow...this is a great write. good job with this.


  • BluRosePoet8488
    November 5, 2007

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    Indeed. What is love? It is all these things and much, much more. Love is bigger than you and I.
    A great write, Ashley! Very beautifully written. Keep the ink flowing. Love and hugs...
    ~Donna~


  • Carpe Noctem
    November 5, 2007
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    WOW. Totally awesome Ashley. Great job! I love it.

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