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Within reach

Just a word from your lips and my heart beats faster
Aglow inside from your loving presence
Knowing my spirit desires to seek you
Over vast distances
Beyond restrictive situations
Glorious heavenly union awaits us
Love breathes through every pore
Each passing hour, thoughts of you dwell within my mind
Nights of warm togetherness, days of new found love
Nearly there my love, not long now...










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  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    January 25, 2008
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    A very calm and soothing feel to it...


  • White-Night-Fantasy
    December 4, 2007
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    Nice poem :


  • LuchiaNanami
    November 29, 2007
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    My bad!

    It was supposed to say "Putting"


  • toysoldier28
    November 27, 2007
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    Ah, love. Sweet read.


  • LuchiaNanami
    November 23, 2007
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    Amazing!

    This poem was great! Puttying love together in a poem, that was GREAT!


  • bones7
    November 11, 2007
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    bravo on this poem.
    simply great.


  • Elsje
    November 8, 2007

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    well done!

    I love reading poems that I can relate to and this is
    one of those, I'm in South-Africa and my boyfriend is leaving for Londen again in two weeks time (only on holiday) he worked/stayed there for 4 years and is crazy about Londen! so, yes will be visiting your page regularly, reading this poem while feeling sorry for myself!

    ;-)


    • Applehead
      November 9, 2007
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      aaww I hope you guys dont miss each other too much. Having said that emotion is an excellent inspiration is it not thanks for your comment!!


  • Blueskywonder
    November 6, 2007

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    Such beautiful thoughts expressed in this piece Apple,
    it feels so soothing... imagery is very warming.

    I realy like this piece... all that is expressed within the thoughtful content. Soooooooo Dreamy!

    Beautiful Apple

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