Miracle Miracle
That's what I need
Miracle Miracle
That's what must be
Be able to forgive
that's what it takes
to plant that seed
to grow with care
a lot of kindness
will blossom the tree
will it happen to me
will it touch my heart
and set it free
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful. That's a really cute and short poem. I like the end. Umm one thing that I would think about is maybe changing send to set (just a thought). I'm sorry it's taken me so long to comment you back and thank you so much for commenting my poem. It was wonderful.
-The Dark Poet-
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will blossom that tree
will it happen to me
will it touch my heart
and send it free
Indeed a mysterious yet soothing verse revealing the miraculous truth of the soul of yours..well done..and thanks for reading and sending comments on my poems..
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