Inhuman Desire of a Hidden Pain
Living was harder for me after you left my heart
Over time I grew sad for what had to start
Veins in my arms amplified my pain and tore me apart
Entering my soul killing me like a poisoned dart
You were everything to me and now I cant have you back
On my mind are the images of you comming back
Under going preasure that always causes my mind to crack
Recovering from the scars that my brother had left me
Altering the past and corruption beneath me
Channeling the anger that decieves me
Having a pain so great that always distorts me
Eliminating everything that brought joy to me
Loving nothing except what always pains me
Worlds collapsing in my mind always changing
Inside a spiriling torment thats always bleeding
Together in unity was the hope I was believing
Holding on to the bonds that kept us going
A living nightmare containing my mind
Loving nothing more than the ties that bind
Longing for the love that was gentle and kind
Many days have past since that fateful day
Years go by as the pain was here to stay
Soldiers dieing for what they love
Over turning the laws that came from above
Under going preasure that my heart had to shove
Longing for the day you will return my love
Author notes
EternalPyre "Christopher A. Pritchard"
option 8: bury me again= poems about heart ache or unrequitted love
A contest entry
- Lost love and getting it back by useles.
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the emotion really flowed through.....the rhyme scheme was pretty good and it has a decent flow....this piece I my opinion is very well-written and constructed....thanks for entering and good luck in the contest
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the rhyme is good. a very good poem. thanks for entering.
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Removing to close this contest. please enter in other contest
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I'm sorry but could you please re enter this poem in a new contest i am holding because of some error made this contest will be shut down a new one will be started same type so don't change the poem please!
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this is good i'm not sure if it is relating to the contest but this is a really good write!
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You were everything to me and now I cant have you back
On my mind are the images of you comming back
Under going preasure that always causes my mind to crack
This has to be my favorite part. This poem tells so much about your past. I would not be able to be this open and I give you props for it.
Good luck in my contest
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