Skin as white as cocain,
Lips as red as blood,
Eyes that peirce the soul,
And with a single glance,
Break someone's heart.
Hair as Black as your heart,
Judging brain,
Evil soul,
Darkest heart,
But I love you.
You are perfectly flawed,
With all I need,
Let me peirce your heart,
Let me penetrate the outer layer,
That you hide behind,
Let me kiss your blood red lips,
Let me stroke your soft white skin,
Let me run my fingers through your hair,
Let me look into your eyes,
And be judged.
When I have kissed, and stroked,
And stared,
Let my teeth peirce your throat,
Let me taste your crimson tears,
Let me see if you can cry,
Let me see what's inside,
Let me love you.
Author notes
I hope this is the kind of thing you wnated, I had a bit of writers block, but I like the way this turned out. Cyanide Dreamer
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Comments
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Oh my
You have penned this well for the reader feels the fear and the rush indeed
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Thankyou so much
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This is very well written, but i need you to put your username in your author's notes!
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Done it.
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wow
I oculd really feel your emotion and it gave me a feeling of safety..great work!
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Thankyou
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Interesting piece here. I would have prefered if you would have put what option you chose but it's ok. Next time please do though. I really don't know what to say. But overall the poem was good. Thanks for entering and good luck to you.
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wow!! that realy relates to me! why wont she see that i luv her???
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she? Who?
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oops...u dont kno her, shes frm the ice rink
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oh.. cool.
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Wow! Very emotional I really like this poem. The imagery is great! Awesome write
Which option are you putting this under?
Leslie
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Love... Cant remember number
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