Night falls,
your arms caress me.
So gently your strong hands touch.
I miss this, always so beautiful.
You breathe softly into my ear,
tickle it with your tongue.
I smile, you kiss,
down my neck, to my chest.
You play games with your mouth
on my breasts.
It feels incredible.
Down further you go,
doing what you do best.
Amazing!
Things become more intense,
I kiss your body on my way down
to please you.
Your quiet moans
make me want you in me more.
I love hearing it, it makes me happy
to know I please you.
You can't take it anymore
and lay me down on the bed.
Slow movements in unison
feel so right.
Our shadows dancing on the wall.
We fit together so perfectly.
You grab my hands and put them on your back
so you can go faster.
I feel tingling coming from all my pores.
I want to scream, I dig my fingers into you
and drag them down.
Leaving red scratches of my love.
You become louder,
I know it's coming.
I know I can let go
and at the same time it happens.
It goes on for what seems like forever.
Finally, we become quiet.
You resting on top of me,
telling me you love me.
I look into your eyes and see tears of happiness.
I know now that we are
meant to test the sands of time.
I love you Thomas ♥
Author notes
Option 4
A contest entry
- *Rounds Contest :R1-Form* by Carpe Noctem.
450 points, ended December 11, 2007, 14 entries
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360 points, ended November 22, 2007, 37 entries
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300 points, ended November 24, 2007, 14 entries
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750 points, ended November 11, 2007, 13 entries
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300 points, ended November 11, 2007, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - EROTIC......NOT SENSUAL........ by parntsoftwins.
300 points, ended November 12, 2007, 7 entries
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2400 points, ended November 17, 2007, 14 entries
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525 points, ended December 1, 2007, 43 entries
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450 points, ended November 25, 2007, 28 entries
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3500 points, ended December 14, 2007, 25 entries
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Comments
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very deep; very erotic
a piece that builds & builds... & tastefully done at that (no pun intended) shows without being too explicit... top marks for a work that would make a saint feel quite unnecessary...
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ooh, erotica... Tasteful erotica
lucky for me 
I'm not really into erotica poems unless it's written tastefully 
Anyway, I like the imagery you have painted with these words. Also the few metaphors in there are a nice touch of detail
Thank you for entering this contest, I wish you the best of luck!
Leander -
Very beautiful encounter of passion.....well done and just beautiful...thanks for entering.....novy
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Nicely done
Very erotic, but in a nice sort of way. Thank you very much for entering our contest, and best of luck.
Brazos
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amazingly written good luck
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aww i love it .. that was hott.. thank you for entering.. and good luck in my contest
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Very well written! You were very descriptive, but not OVERLY descriptive, and I appreciate the subtleties. I didn't see a lot of the "honey" aspect, but I did love reading this.
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such a snugly fitting tribute, dancing off the end of your expressive tongue over the column you have raised, fingerpainting a beautiful moment in scripted joy. ~~Artis
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This is a wonderful piece of poetry, unfortunatly this poem won HM in my contest lastnight. I am happy you entered but I feel it's not right to award it once again. Thank you for understanding.
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I enjoyed reading it very much. It was more sensual than what I was looking for, but thank you for entering.
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good write!!!! I liked the flow of it. It is very heart felt and erotic........ hope to read more poetry from you in the future... Good luck in the contest
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Hiya,
Well I am speachless!
(sorry if I have spelled that wrong)
I think you should DQ my own poem now For I feel that you are a clear winna of this contest Well you would be If it was me anyway!
I think that you have a grate talent and that you should thnk of writting poetry off of the site for I think that you could do grate things, I know I would buy and book with your poetry init!
Good luck in the contest!
XxSarahxX
God Bless You And All You Care For!
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I see this deep, quiet sensual need roaring up under the surface. Very needy, but fulfilling. Finalist list. -
Great poem good luck in the contest
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ooo sooo intense! kept me right on the edge of my seat!!
What a great hot sensual write!!
Thanks soo much for entering!
L-R-P
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This is incredible! Such a beautiful story
you told here. Well done and thanks a lot
for sharing this one. Wonderful imagery
and emotions this piece as well. Good luck
to you in this contest!
Jeremy0826 -
This is incredible. I love it, how truthful and sincere you are. This is great. Thank you so muc hfor entering. I wrote a poem similar, and I must say this is what real love is like, this is so finely drawn out. Beautiful.
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Well this is a very interesting and well written peice you have enterd into my contest. The one thing however that I seem to be having a little difficuty is you clearly have it marked at the top of the page that this is a peice ment for persons 18 and over, and it seems to me that this could be considerd an erotic poem, although it is not hard core erotica. I have in one of my rules no erotica but sensual is fine. And I find it hard to decide wether or not this is breaking the rules. I really like it and it is a very sweet and well written peice that pulls the reader into the emotion of the poem. Good write and good luck in the contest!
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I see, someone has been naughty.
Oh, about this part,
You play games with your mouth
on my breasts.
It feels incredible.
Down further you go,
doing what you do best.
What would that be that I do best, please tell me. I am a vegetarian.
This is a marvelous piece. I love the flow of it. Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing -
I think that the imagery was really amazing in this, Leslie. I think you really describe sex very well...so, you're experienced right? Haha. Just kidding.
I think you have one hell of a talent for poetry...no matter what the genre is. They're all good poems. -
Thank you for submitting. This is so romantic it should be in the "Love" category... not the "Erotica!" Although it is correctly categorized, it could go either way. This is a wonderfully poetic erotica and kudos to you in keeping it clean instead of getting insanely raunchy like most people would have done. Good job and good luck in my contest.
~*DJ*~
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Yes, this is fine to enter. Very beautiful and poetically provocative. Good luck!
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