"I'm buried beneath the bedsheets
where the thought of you still sleeps." ~ aspiralnotebook
Stars t.w.i.n.k.l.e
chimerically
as sunlight fades
to : dusk :
Thoughts that drift
through time and space
like snowflakes in the
-wind-
of you && me
destroyed
in a single
.act.
[baby, i'm buried beneath these bedsheets,
where thoughts of you still sleep]
too hot,
(too [lonely])
without the mask
you r,i,p,p,e,d
to shreds
last summer[[sunshine]].
you stole('borrowed')
my "innocence"
and hid it from my he<3rt
[beneath those same old bedsheets]
where you stashed
those torn pages
//of my die-ary//
And the **stars** still )shine(
through this window
on my fragile memory;
of what you left
to decay..
..seam-by-seam-by-seam..
Author notes
Option: "I'm buried beneath the bedsheets
where the thought of you still sleeps."
Username: Silver-Shadow
A contest entry
- A Plethora of One-Liners by Epilogue.
900 points, ended December 16, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honest feedback appreciated.
Comments
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It's been a while!
Love this, really like the text-illustrations too!
Well done and BEST of luck in the competition!
xxxxxx
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