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passion is a beast

PULSE!
My heartbeat thuds the moment you walk in the room
your body is enticing and I'm ready to tear fire into you.
Your small waist line, expands down to those curved hips
then I dart my eyes up to your full, luscious, curved lips
and my breathing deepens, and my heart beat triples,
as my eyes look slightly down to your 36D cups
the moment you turn and flaunt your marvelous BUTT
I'm screaming in my MIND, that "I wanna F***!"
And my manhood stands firm and ready to bust
at one stroke of your touch.
ready to take over, Passion is the beast in me,
Tell me, have you ever seen the incredible hulk in sexual heat?
Picture me, with your enticing thighs wrapped around me
embracing me to reach the ending of your addictive mystery
your red painted finger nails peirce me
as you grip me, tightly, firmly,
as tears leak from your eyes
and  your love leaks down your inner thighs
trying to endure the ride, the intensity
of my thrusts, and your grips tightens but you're a little shaky
baby are you about to bust?
Well passion is the beast that you unleashed with your tease
now turn over, unto your knees, and grip the sheets
cause I'm not gonna go gentle, Baby I'm goin BEAST!
I can see your expression of pleaure in the mirror
biting your bottom lip, and now biting the sheets
to silence your moans, But it's pointless see?
Cause passion is a beast when he responds to a tease.
So tell me, can you feel the sensitivity of my love against your walls
pounding in and out, til you shout and steam rises about.
I told you, I'm gonna tear fire into you
but you didn't believe me, so tell me
passion is a beast aint he?

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  • Lady Purple
    December 2, 2007
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    DAMN DRE!!!!


  • storiesuntold gold member
    December 1, 2007
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    Whew this is hot

    A very well written piece of work here and it brings out the beast in any reader indeed


  • SOLS.Moonlight
    November 7, 2007

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    Dang...........This was hella good. I like the flow of the passion. I liked this line because you can't hide pleasure like that.

    I can see your expression of pleaure in the mirror
    biting your bottom lip, and now biting the sheets
    to silence your moans, But it's pointless see?
    Cause passion is a beast when he responds to a tease.


  • Expression
    November 6, 2007

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    OOOhh shyt! This is hard as a muthafucka.....damn! i like dis line the best
    "Well passion is the beast that you unleashed with your tease
    now turn over, unto your knees, and grip the sheets
    cause I'm not gonna go gentle, Baby I'm goin BEAST!"

    oh damn beast mode!!! but yea this is...wow yea keep it up
    Much luv
    ♥kaila♥


  • Number 13
    November 5, 2007

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    Damn Dre,
    never stop to amaze me!

    Your freakin incredible with this,
    every time it's just like "DAMN."

    And I agree with Eltee! ♥


  • q-pid
    November 5, 2007

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    biting your bottom lip, and now biting the sheets
    to silence your moans, But it's pointless see?
    Cause passion is a beast when he responds to a tease.

    This line is absolutely brilliant!!!
    You a beast for writing this... lol


  • MahoganyFlow
    November 5, 2007

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    ! This was hott! Is it really that serious? Nah but you came back with it. "So can you feel the sensitivity of my love against your walls"...Showin off!

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