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**My Life**
My thoughts tear me down, and dreams have ebbed away. My life full of regrets, and scorned with abuse. My pain is so profound, Yet still I rise. © Cara L. Greenlee, All rights reserved Nov 5 1:08 PM 2007 http://allpoetry.com/poem/3576930
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A contest entry
- Prompt 15 entries 30 words or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended November 7, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wonderful
Very well done. Congrats on your honorable mention.
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Nice job kiddo
Congratulations!
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Wow. You and me both! These words are spoken so truly. We are never suppose to regret, they say it was what we wanted. Maybe it was - but the reactions of what we wanted was what we regret. Sometimes our dreams seem nothing more than an idea, and it hurts to dream and lose all hope. I am one who's mind never allows them a moment of peace, and I wish I could shut it off sometimes. There must be a reason why we think so damn much - I wish I knew it, but there must.
I am glad that there is hope at the end of your poem - we will always rise above all these challenges thrown in our direction as long as we don't let our fears interfere with our strength!
LOVE YOU
Sabrina
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Very good.
Lift the self by the self, for the self is the selfs only friend, and the self is the selfs only enemy.
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Guilty But I still Love You
I must not be doing my job.
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well done
You have done well here, your poem speaks to all who read it, no matter how life pushes you down, yet still I rise - great line and great ending, blessings John
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It is true that the human being has this gift to rise above all adversity-another little miracle.
Good luck with this.x
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