There is so much I could write about you
Sometimes it's hard to know where to begin
Beautiful inside and out
A perfect Ten
I know I may not be the best looking
Or an Ace at how to dress
I know I can be a Little Joker
And still you love me nonethless
And I'm grateful for the happiness you've created
For the stress that you reduce
And for this I promise you I'll always stay
And never "chunk the Deuce"
I was once just a Jack,
untill you claimed as me your King
So I vow to love you endlessly
And give you my everything
So if you're feeling stress or troubled
Please don't be dismayed
Because when life Deals you a ton of dirt
I'm here to help you with a Spade
I could visit every Club, and own every Diamond
But I'd still be misssing a part
Because the only thing that makes my Deck complete
Is you... The Queen of my heart
In a list
A contest entry
- New Contest for Poems written in 2007 only!!!! by Anna Emkah.
900 points, ended December 24, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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WOw...
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very lovely poem indeed
I really liked it. it reminded me of my fiance who calls me his queen 
..again..a lovely poem
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I love this, it's just truly beautiful! The flow is wonderful, and I love the extended theme of the cards.
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I could visit every Club, and own every Diamond
But I'd still be misssing a part
Because the only thing that makes my Deck complete
Is you... The Queen of my heart
the perfect way maybe the only way to end thos poem.
it is really genius the way u choose and how u describe this feelings.
thank u for sharings this.
And keep up the good work
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I could visit every Club, and own every Diamond
But I'd still be misssing a part
Because the only thing that makes my Deck complete
Is you... The Queen of my heart
Ah..this is universal response of the heart..and represent the true love..wonderful emotions and sacred sentiments are here..I love this beautiful write..well done.... -
Very nice - The Queen of my Heart... It has a double meaning. You refer to love and to a card game, using all the different symbols: Ten, Ace, Joker, Deuce, Jack, King, Deals, Spade, Club, Diamond... and last but not least the Queen of Hearts!!! Very well done.
Anna.
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You have been very creative with your theme and brought a steady stream on connectors throughout the piece. Good show!
David
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how sweet
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very nice. very very impressive and creative.
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impressive
Impressive. Most impressive. Wonderful use of metaphor and play on words. This is very creative. Nicely done. -
This is so talented
I can not even find the words to begin to tell you how great and what a masterpeice you have here. This is absolutly gorgeous. Thank you so much for entering, and best of luck! -
This is so talented
I can not even find the words to begin to tell you how great and what a masterpeice you have here. This is absolutly gorgeous. Thank you so much for entering, and best of luck! -
I like how u turned a simple card deck into something special. That's cool. How true it all is and u should win the contest with this cause it really flowed.
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awww babi i love it! and i agree wit dre u were very creative with the metaphors...i love it and i love u...ur mi King of my heart*mwah*
♥kaila♥
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This is so sweet You and Kaila are way cute,
I hope y'all go far.
I love the metaphors with the cards,
it's genius!
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I knew it was a metaphor when you started naming card game names. But that's what's up, although it's not the best I read from you. But still, it was very creative and the metaphor was pretty cute. But I'm sure Kaila loves it best though. That's all that really matters.
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