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Suicide

Your as selfish as they come
What your doin' is flat out dumb

What about the people who love and care
Your doin' this to them and thats just not fair

No matter what you say its just not right
We all keep battling you give up the fight

You left us all without so much as a word
For what just because some kids called you a nerd

Life gets better as you grow
This well this i guess you'll never know

Thanks alot man we are the friends that had your back
Whats your deal man you weren't even that far off track

You were a friend of mine
Then you went all columbine

Now like a Selfish shit you can hide
To us you said "fuck you" and committed suicide

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This is my opinion on suicide. If you have a problem with it don't comment because its not worth arguing over.

Im not fighting with people about it Hostel coments will be deleted.

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  • The-missing-pieces
    May 8, 2008

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    a rant

    yeah i get that speech when im depressed. its a great poem and 100% true. i love it.. its deep from inside you.


  • Romanee
    November 7, 2007

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    I don't entirely agree with this piece but I still think it's a very good poem, great rhythm and it definitly deserves an applaud, great write, keep it up, Romanee, xx


  • Jeg Elsker Ost
    November 5, 2007
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    omg so true just be like
    F U SUICIDIAL FREAK


  • SithHappens
    November 5, 2007

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    I agree...

    It's not worth fighting over, because it is your opinion. My opinion, too. If I could survive the crap that I have, then so can anyone else. I do just have one thing to say Davi... you were going for the word "hostile" I do believe