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Together Forever

Such a tragic story, like Romeo and Juliet.
Two starcrossed lovers sentanced to death.
A forbidden love, they steal away into the night.
Not wanting the truth, they surrender to each other.
With a knife in his hand, He vows always to love her.
With a knife in her hand, She vows to be with him forever.
This suicide, will keep them together, even if they loved another.
She puts the knife to his throat, and whispers "Let me kill you my love"
So he puts his knife to her throat and says "On the count of Three"
"One" says the girl with a tears in her eye,
"Two" says the boy with a smile across his lips,
"Three" They both say, sliding knives across pale skin.
Holding eachother close, the lovers lay dying.
They look eachother in the eyes, knowing the truth.
That dying was the only way to be together forever. 

Wierdly kinda stupid.

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  • daddys girl08
    November 8, 2007
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    daaaaaaaamn

    this is really good


  • AAA Taurus The Bull gold member
    November 5, 2007

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    Great Stuff ,

    Eexpressive and Powerful visual journey.bravo
    excellent! bravo Nothing to change. I look forward to your next write.



  • colorxmyxworld
    November 5, 2007
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    hahaha i liked
    keep writing ur really good at it