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Please Listen

Please mommy, please Daddy,
Listen to what I have to tell you.
I didn't know, what to say,
But my friend, he brought a gun to school today.
It was just out of nowhere,
No one saw it coming, he never said a word.
I was sitting at my desk, trying to do my work,
Then out of silence, he stood up and went biserk.
First he shot our teacher,
Then it was his friend Jeremy.
Next it was a little girl named Sammie,
And Finally it was me.
I lay on the ground, my blood pools around the floor.
My eyes are heavy with tears and I am starting to get tired.
I look up at him, and cry out "Why?"
Then another shot was fired,
My friend looked into my tear stained eyes,
A small sadness I saw in his soul.
There was something his heart was missen,
Something didnt make him whole.
Then my friend closed his eyes,
And he began to pray.
"God I have been bad,
I have killed my friend, its hard to explain,
But I think I might be crazy,
Or just completely insane.
So now that she is in heaven,
I think I want to join her.
My family, they wont miss me,
Its not like they were ever there at all."
With my last final breath, I grabbed his hand.
Then another shot rang out,
My friend and I were gone.

kinda sucks.....What do you think?????

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